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Friday, April 17, 2020

my kindness story

I was learning to make a kind story.

like this post because I like to write stories and be creative.
do you like to write stories?

2 comments:

  1. Hi Frances, I like the main idea of your story about being kind. If you had to add some details about how the girl stood up for the other girl, what would it be? I'd love to find out more about your characters.

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    1. the other girl said how would you feel if that happened to you.

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