Hi Frances,Great Job! I really like your Story! but can you make a Part 2!?!? and in Part 2, could you make some speech with the characters Talking? Thanks and bye!
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I love that the superpower is, ice!
ReplyDeleteHi Mrs H,
DeleteThank you for the comet but should I do a part two?
Hi Frances,Great Job! I really like your Story! but can you make a Part 2!?!? and in Part 2, could you make some speech with the characters Talking? Thanks and bye!
ReplyDeleteHi Danielle,
DeleteThanks for the comet and i will make a part two. but i am still working on something else that begins with C