My Writing!

 Today i was writing a story And i hope you like it and this is what my story is!

It was a sunny morning. but suddenly. I heard a knock on the door… I went to open the door,

but the only thing I saw was a time travel machine and a cloak It was a black cloak. I put on the

cloak and I went to my mum and said “Look look I got a new cloak!” my mum looked around and

said “Anyone there?” I ignored her and went to the time machine and started to press all the

buttons. I went out of the time machine and looked around. I was in ancient China! My outfit

changed too it looked like this:

luckily there was a computer inside the time machine. I looked at the date… It was

luna new year! It was also night… I went to look around and see lots of people. I went to investigate

some more. I heard music so I followed the sound  and I saw lots of people dancing on stage

of lots of music. There was a lot of food too! I was getting hungry so went to a cafe. a lady in

front of me said something, I don't know what she said because she was speaking in another

language so i didn’t understand what she was saying. so I just got something and checked my

pocket but my money wasn’t there! the lady said something else. a person came up to me

and said something so I responded by saying “Hu?” the other person looked

shocked!  She said “You speak English?!” I replied with “yes why and I'm happy

that you speak English too! I can't find anyone to speak English!” The girl said “Well my name is

Eden, and it's hard to find someone that speaks English what's your name?” I said “My name

is Frances”

                                                        To be continued... 

Do you like my story???