Hi Frances Good effort with your writing. I like how you have tryed to use different types of puncuation. Next time could you use a different colour font so it is easier to read. Well done Miss Hudson
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Hi Frances
ReplyDeleteGood effort with your writing. I like how you have tryed to use different types of puncuation. Next time could you use a different colour font so it is easier to read.
Well done
Miss Hudson
Thankyou Miss Hudson, I will remember that next time.
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